In the dark warm night
Ocean’s waves burst against the side rocks
As chipmunks chewed acorns onshore.
Inspiration On: Thursday, 6 December 2012 at 8:10am
Revised On: Friday, 7 December 2012 at 12am
The image came portraying what was in my dream. Then I wrote it down.
this is cute 🙂
I also find it cute.
I liked this a lot! Critters in a poem add a cute and special detail!
Oh I’m so glad for your kind compliments 🙂
Yes, storms surround us but we can keep our peace–like the chipmunks! Wonderful, Yoshiko!
Thank you, Jane 🙂