Peeping Toddler


Suddenly popping out his head
Like a turtle; peeking at the flowers
Surroundings then declaring his house.


Inspiration On: Thursday, 17 January 2013 at 9:40pm
Inspiration Ends On: Saturday, 19 January 2013 at 1am

As I walked home with my son in my husband’s arms, he suddenly peeped at a nearby condominium. He was observing the flowers, plants and buildings. Out of the blue, he declared that the condominium was his house. Finally, he replied that it was not his house.

“Popping out his head across the fence” was the first words came to me. But I choose to express it in haiku rather than free verse. I want to limit my words limitation as a challenge to improve my creative writing.

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