Lollipop
White lollipop
Moon
White moon
The
White moon
Looks like my
White lollipop
Round
Round white moon
Round white lollipop
Circle
Circle white moon
Circle white lollipop!
Inspiration On: Friday, 26 April 2013 at 8:31pm
My son was eating a white lollipop. We were out for a walk. Upon noticing the white full moon, he related it with his white lollipop. With his remark, the above poetry came progressively.
awesome yaa. U made a poem out of the lollipop.
M impressed.
Cheers
Vishal
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Vishal,
Thank you for your compliment.
God bless,
Yoshiko
Is this what our capacity to connect disparate dots is all about? As our minds visualise and create? As we link the lollipop with the Moon?
Shakti
I think so, Shakti π
Yoshiko
I really enjoyed this poem – there’s so much fun in it and I love the comparisons between lollipop and moon.
Thank you, Sarah π
This was very sweet, Yoshiko:)
Glad and happy for you to find it sweet, Padmini π