A well loved bright sky with children play together on the greenery scent of grasses. Grass breeze through the ankles as every feet stomp onto the grasses. Their voices are thrilled with the windy day and the birds on the branches of the trees chirp gladly. Such a nice day for them as they rest on the grasses enjoying
A perfect bright shiny sphere
Shining brightly in the vast blue sky
Cover the dark with light
Inspiration On: Sunday, 16 June 2013 at 1:44am to 1:52pm
My imagination played around as I was writing for the Ligo Haibun Challenge titled ‘The Sun’ from Padmini at http://call2read.com/2013/06/15/ligo-haibun-challenge-5/ Do take part if you are interested. Enjoy.
This is gorgeous Yoshiko! Your prose flows in lyrical like beauty, much like singing a song to the sun. And I love your haiku! Thank you so much for entering, Penny
Thank you, Penny, for your compliments and encouragements 🙂
Thanks, Yoshiko
I always say what I mean and mean what I say Yoshiko. Your haibun was very uplifting and made me feel good about the day! 🙂
Thanks a lot and I feel glad and satisfied that my haibun uplifts you 🙂
Tour haibun shows your love of humanity and nature. I enjoyed it in it’s simplicity, my never-ending quest!
Thank you for enjoying my simple writings 🙂
Simplicity is what we should aspire to as writes! – And is the essence of haiku, well done!
Thank you and I’m still learning 🙂
Lovely!!
Thank you, Tersia, for finding my this poetry lovely 🙂
Hi Yoshiko, This was a beautiful haibun. lovely like a song. Thank you for participating this time.
Thank you, Padmini, and am glad to participate. I’m looking forward for the next one 😉
beautiful in its simplicity. the imagery is lovely 🙂
Thank you, Kz 🙂
Beautiful words, Yoshiko 🙂
Thank you, Celestine 🙂
Thank you
loved it!
Thank you and glad for you to love this 🙂
Wonderful feel to this. It makes me feel lighter, happier reading it. Lovely images.
Thank you and glad that my haibun makes you feel lighter and happier.
You paint a lovely picture. Well done.
Thank you, Sarah
Thank you, Sarah 🙂
THANK YOU SO MUCH. http://www.yakutia-coppercure.co.uk/haibun.html#.UcSwhvlM_c8
Most welcome