Eerie
Darkness looms in the room
Chilling silence fills my body
Eeriness clouds my mind
Hallucination engulfs me
A scary small iris of an eyeball
Staring at me
With blue veins at the eyeball
Staring at me
Between the doors
Fear envelops me
Thump! Thump!
My heartbeat races
Whole body paralyzes
Thump! Thump!
Shouting to my Lord for help
Inspiration On: Friday, 28 June 2013 from 12:35am to 12:45am
Inspired from this Eerie photo as a creative writing challenge. I would like to invite you for a creative writing challenge based on the title ‘Eerie’. Will you please join this?
Creative Writing Challenge Invitation
1. Title your poetry with the title ‘Eerie’
2. Any type of poetry is welcomed
3. Please link back to this URL
Thank you for taking part in this challenge.
oh man Help ain’t coming
love thrillers and you have woven in so beautifully
Thank you, Soma, and hope you can join in the challenge for fun 🙂
its good one yoshiko! loved it!
Thank you, Sharmishtha, for loving this and leaving your comment 🙂
That is eerie – staring silently
I feel so by staring at the photo 🙂
Wow this was really awesome! I loved it Yoshiko! You write so well!
Thank you, Terry, I’m still learning
I like it. It’s quite creepy. 🙂
Thanks 🙂
WOW ! Really great sentences! Like this one very much: “A scary small iris of an eyeball …Staring at me”
Thank you 🙂