In breaking tradition
In breaking law
In our lives
Does freedom in our lives
Brings happiness to us?
Does freedom in law breaking
Cultivate seeds of love or evil?
Does liberty in all things
Cause us to abuse our authority?
Do we use freedom to send love and peace into the world?
Do we use liberty to love one another?
Does freedom protects the earth or abuse it?
What is freedom?
What is liberty?
What is this so called freedom and liberty?
Inspiration On: Wednesday, 25 December 2013 from 10:27pm to 10:35pm
Steve Hi’s poetry in Freedom as Cooperative inspired me and I responded with the birth of this rhythm poetry echoing in my mind. When I search the link to Steve’s poetry at wordpress, I can’t seems to find it. Please, Steve, respond to this poetry with your links when you read this. Thank you.
Thanks to Ann Koplow to visit my blog and provide me the link to Steve Hi’s poetry available at http://stevehi312.wordpress.com/2013/10/16/freedom-as-co-operative/.
Earth’s reserve decreases with the increase of high rise sky building
Now, preserve earth community is alerted of the terrible disaster for the
Need to conserve forests to save earth
Conserve earth by budding seeds to grow a new
Reserve to populate the lost greenery
Preserve trees through recycling
Recycle process in the factory to preserve earth
Won’t the pollution affect the reserve’s growth?
Since pollution is hazardous, how to conserve the earth’s and people’s
What is solution to eliminate pollution?
How is pollution removed from recycle?
Bow to manual labours may solves this
Inspiration On: Monday, 21 October 2013 at 6:03pm
Inspiration Ends On: Saturday, 26 October 2013 at 3:50am
Unexpectedly, “reserve preserve conserve” inspired me that it can be a rhyme. As my poetry flowed out, the “how” captured my attention and “bow” birthed out. Finally, I rearranged the three rhyming words and decided to include “how”.
Vast lushful greenery forest
Existential are found
On the mountain terrain
Inhaling and exhaling
The cooling fresh atmosphere
This is the place humans miss the most
Before the rise of buildings
Mankind and animals
Dwell among the nature
Planting agriculture for food
Hunting for food
Though practice bartering
No gold, silvers and bronze coins are involved
Everyone live peaceably
Few crimes occur
Do mankind misses all these?
Do mankind trade freedom for money?
Don’t mankind remember responsibility?
Don’t mankind remember nature?
Abusing nature for self-gain
Eradicate nature and mountainous terrain
Explode mountain to pieces
Animals population decrease
Building high rise flats, towers, and roads
In the end
Replicate nature with clay, wax, and chemical
As an excuse to maintain clean road
As an excuse to save money for hiring workers
Machines replace human labour
Are mankind doomed to regrets?
No wonder the iceberg melts
No wonder mother earth groans in pain
No wonder animals also groan
No wonder mankind complains stress
No wonder crime rate increases
Are mankind doomed?
Inspiration On: Friday, 6 September 2013 at 8:53am
Inspiration On: Friday, 20 September 2013 at 10:30pm
Upon waking up for work, train of thoughts echoed in my mind accompanied with strong words “explode mountain to pieces”. I’m missing my wordpress friends. Upon revisiting this repeatedly, the completed day is the end of inspiration.
Observing and living on earth
There are two types of people’s judgements
Either criticizes others or self.
Inspiration On: Wednesday, 20 March 2013 at 1:25am
Inspiration Ends On: Thursday, 21 March 2013 at 5pm
Smells from factories’ chimney
As the workers add burning charcoals
Black smoke from trucks’ exhaust
As the drivers travel
from the road to rural areas
to collect processed items from the factories
Smokers on the street
Even throw its butt into rubbish bin
Causing burning smell from it
Smokers in the factories
Will add more air pollution
To the environment
Each smoke is deteriorating
Deteriorating to the environment
Deteriorating to the non-smokers’ health
Deteriorating to the smokers health
Save the earth!
Each of us do our part
Save the earth!
And we will save our lives
And we will save our future generations.
God put Adam to tend the garden
And even Eve to help him.
So we need to
Protect the earth
Save the earth!
Inspiration On: Tuesday, 10 October 2012 at 2:46am
Revised At: 5pm
As the picture of factories throwing up smoke, smokers nearby the factories, vehicles travelling towards the factories were playing in my mind; the words of “Mixes of awful smells” came suddenly. The birds and animals will dislike such smelly air. The sight and smell of passing by a burning smell from the rubbish bin bombarded my mind. Then I mix all my observation. Above all, the book of Genesis inspires me the most.